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《剑啸残阳》评论;
情节把控的还不错,字里行间很富有画面感,人物性格在对话交流之中也完全展现了出来,并且在章节中悬念不断,很能吸引读者的欲望。
章数不多,才二,三万字,每章3000字的数量将每一个事件都写得很是详尽,开头以刺杀武当剑派‘张三丰’开始展开剧情,画面感丰富,人物的性格也展现的凌厉尽致,结尾还留下了伏笔。而第二章开头以‘几度春秋’四字一笔代过,说明了第一章节和第二章节的时间差,第二章主角以奴隶的身份进入九道山庄,有马厮主人和九道山庄人的对话,点出了矛盾冲突,结尾留有伏笔,给了读者更的想象空间。
而对主角的逃亡描写,情节推进很快,悬念十足,画面感丰富,几乎在阅读的同时,脑海已经浮现出了画面,主角的性格也在这个章节发成了巧妙地转变,写的很清晰,惟妙惟肖。
对于熊淍逃跑的心理过程的描写,尽管熊淍没有逃走成功,但依旧将他的性格,义气,男人全部淋漓尽致的展现了出来,画面感依旧很好,并且很有血性。
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